I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something helpful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Hi Alex
ReplyDeleteI like that you were able to move on to your fast finishers task, but nearly this entire post is you explaining that you are doing a fast finish task. I want to see a paragraph explaining Freak's first impression of Max, and Max's impression of Freak. Then you are able to make a personal comment about what you think of these two characters.
I am not able to mark this task as complete as it has not met the criteria. See if you can have another look and fix it up.
- Miss Birtch