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I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Thursday, 24 September 2020
Freak the Mighty.
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Business and enterprise.
Hello readers today I'm going to be making a new blog post about Business and enterprise. We have been selling ice cream, we bought 2 gallons of ice cream and 48x of ice cream cones. It costed 19 dollars, we put our table outside then arranged our products. We had a sale, last time it was 3 dollars now it's $1, There was a lot of people buying our product cause it was cheap. I was the financial manager so I took care of the money. We sold 34 ice cream in 15 minutes, we ran out, so we bought the other company's products. After interval, the Hornby primary people came, it was so messy after when they came. We had to clean up our tables, we picked rubbish outside and waited for lunchtime. Please comment on my blog post and give me some feedback about my writing.
Wednesday, 23 September 2020
BULLIES
Hello readers today I'm going to be making a new blog post about drama. This is week is our first week for drama and we are learning about how to read a play and then we going to do a play. Today we today we started reading a script and this is what we are learning.
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Tuesday, 22 September 2020
The Fox and the Crow - Characterizations DLO
Hello readers today I'm going to be making a new blog post about reading, today we are making a DLO about the fox and the crow. We are going to be looking for the themes or the morals of the stories, Morals are valuable lessons that we have learned. This week we have been understanding and learning about Different Characterizations. We have been learning about the antagonist and the protagonist. The antagonist is the good guy or what we want to win in a story. A protagonist is the bad guy or the guy that no one wants for it to win. This is what I did about the Fox and the Crow:
Monday, 21 September 2020
Characterization - Gingerbread Man
Hello readers today I'm going to be making a new blog post about Characterization. Today I'm going to be doing a characterization blog about the ginger bread man.
Who is the protagonist? The protagonist is the fox because he saved the day and ate the cheeky gingerbread man.
Who is the antagonist? The antagonist is the gingerbread man because he is bad and we don't want him to win.
The direct characterization of the old lady and the old man is lonely because the narrator said it.
The indirect Characterization of the gingerbread man is cheeky because if his face expression, he was fast because the horse couldn't run after him and he was easy to trick because he got trick by the smart fox.
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Monday, 14 September 2020
Math - Geometry
Hello readers today I'm going to be making a new blog post about Math. Today we are learning about geometry, geometry is mostly about shapes, angles and directions. We got to do a slide with some researching tasks, Here is what I did:
Character Words.
Hello readers today I'm going to be making a new blog post about Drama, This term me are going to be doing drama. Today we are learning about Character Words. What we do in character words are Summarizing the roles of the characters.
Character Words
Protagonist The protagonist is the main character or the good guy of the story. Like Lightning Maqueen.
Antagonist The Antagonist is the bad guy, the people will want the antagonist to lose because this role is being the bad guy. Like Loki.
Narrator The narrator is the guy that talks in the background, the narrator summaries the story. Like " It was a nice day but suddenly....."
Flat Character The flat character is the character that doesn't develop. Like Juliette's mother.
Dynamic Character A dynamic character is a small character that does a big thing. Like Ebeneezer Scrooge
Static Character A static character is a character that doesn't change until the end of the movie Like Scar in lion king he was still a bad guy.
Round Character A round character is the star of the story, Like Elizabeth Bennet in Jane Austen's Pride
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