I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Tuesday, 26 November 2019
Sad Story - Creative Writing
I was Twelve years old when I knew I was adopted. It was so hard to deal with, I loved my mom Why did she tell me this with this young age? When I was born my real mom gave me to another woman, she didn't want to keep me because she think I wouldn't have a good life with her. My mom that has adopted me gave me everything I want. Except my real mom, she doesn't know where she is. She told me If she knows she will tell me. I really wanted to meet her, I didn't want to have this life, I want to be with my real family I told her. She cried, She told me that she was adopted to. She told me her story. She had worst times, she always wanted to be with her dad but be passed away. She was adopted by rich people and gave her everything she wants. At least my mom gave me to her, now I am living happily with her. The riches the she has now is from the people the had adopted her. I stayed with her, and I had a good life.
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