Hello readers today I'm today I'm going to be making a new blog post about my novel study. We need to do make a summary about what we have read about the book. Today is our first week, I think it was harder to read because I haven't been doing it for 2 weeks. Who is the protagonist? The protagonist is Kevin and Max. Max is the smart one and he helps Kevin to get smarter. Kevin is big and strong but he is not that intelligent. He helps and protects Max, Max is disabled because he needs leg braces. Max likes playing with his American flyer. They became friends by Max helping Kevin to get his American Flyer. I predict that they will be standing up for people that is getting bullied. Please comment on my blog post and give me some feedback about my writing.
Thursday, 15 October 2020
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Hello Alex, It's Matt I really like your blog but next time i think u should check your words, just want to say u did a good job
ReplyDeleteHi Alex
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing your summary. You've made a nice start, but I would like to see some more details about each of the characters. You are a capable writer, but this blog isn't reflective of your ability. We've done lots of work around characterization and how to identify direct and indirect messages the authors tells us.
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