Hello readers today i'm going to be showing you how to put your slide onto your blog here it is.
Please comment on my blog post bye.
I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something helpful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Hi Alex
ReplyDeleteGreat work on completing our fast finishers task. To improve your blog posts, try to remember the following things to include:
- the LO (why are we learning this)
- asking for specific feedback
- picture or video embedded to make it more interesting
I would like to see you adding some more detail to your introductions and conclusions to challenge yourself.
- Miss Birtch