Please comment on my blog post and give me some feedback about my DLO.
I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Thursday, 10 September 2020
Cancer
Hello readers today I'm going to be making a new blog post about Lung cancer, we have been learning about health. Last 2 weeks we chose some very bad crisis that is happening in New Zealand to learn about. I chose lung cancer because I think it's very serious and there is also a lot of people smoke here in New Zealand. I gathered a lot of information about lung cancer and put them all in a DLO. Here is DLO:
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Hi alex i like how you put the bit graph in and detailed it with all the blue i really like the colour blue it was really good alex.
ReplyDeleteThanks Diego for the feedback It really Made my day!
DeleteHello Alex I really like your post but next time maybe you could add some photos in your slides and make it a different color but everything else looks reall good.
ReplyDeleteJesse
Hi Alex i love your blog i learned more about the lung cancer because of your in formation given you did also a nice graph im just thinking if you can include how to prevent the lung cancer.
ReplyDeleteThanks for the comment, Sometimes you can't prevent lung cancer because it passed to you. But you can prevent it by not smoking.
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